Excellent.....
wow.......great appreciation for your pretty good expressions.... well done and I really love the style of writings.... 5/5

Nazeer

Another great poem , as before it's well written and word choice was wonderful . full of emotions , you express yourself very well , I like that ,,, keep up the good work ,,, your friend Tracy d.............5/5

I prefer for people to use rhyming words with a little more structure but the main idea of your poem was good. The second stanza was my favorite. I wasn't big on the other two. To me the title felt a little ocward but that's only because it didn't really have to do with sucking blood it was about how while other things change blood will always be there. Over all I think it's an alright poem so I'll give it a three.

Good poem
thx for the comments
no this is the first time
ive written a series
and only because there is a deep meaning to it
that you will find out at the ending if you read it

Keenan

I would pay more attention to imagery than to concepts.

Very mysteriously intriguing