by Sumit Ojha Aug 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
A Pain |
Very dark with an unmistakable theme |
Sweetness. |
by Not
GREAT WRITE, I LOVE THE STYLE YOU PICKED FOR THIS PIECE, NICE GREAT SIMPLE POEM KEEP WRITING!!..5/5 |
by Jenni
This was a good poem, but the rhythm was a little off. I felt that you could have made it more descrptive instead of being so vague. |
by Sumit Ojha
Thanks... |