Thanks

I am really happy to read your poems again and again and comment....
Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.

Nazeer

Ahhh a bit of a vampire are we? :) It's alright. I'll give it a four.

Great poem

Do you have some kind of fascination with vampires? lol, nice poem- though a little confusing in some parts (for me)

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..

Nazeer

Its fascinating..... 5/5

Nazeer

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Hey, I'm poet of 'A Pain', and thanks for reading my poems... If you have any suggestion regarding my poems then please feel free to write here or send you E-mail at my email address 10x@techemail.com

This is a good poem
through i dont understand what the point of the letters that start randomly about halfway through the poem
but i ignored it and kept reading and thought it was a good poem
great job once agian

Keenan

The course of the poem was thrown off towards the ending of the piece I thought it drug out too long without really giving the reader a clear message

Okay i only have one suggestion for this poem

"N I want to give you a mark
A mark of love
A mark on your neck
A mark created
By my sharp teethes
With a pain"

on that stanza, i think it would look and sound better as
"I want to give you a mark
A mark of love
on your neck
A mark created
By my sharp teeth
With a pain"

just my thoughts. i still gave this a 5/5 keep up the good work

Hmm this one is great! those thoughts was truly true and very worded. its kinda unique style and perfect combination of those amazing words.. keep it up and keep on writing 5/5

Thanks...

This was a good poem, but the rhythm was a little off. I felt that you could have made it more descrptive instead of being so vague.

GREAT WRITE, I LOVE THE STYLE YOU PICKED FOR THIS PIECE, NICE GREAT SIMPLE POEM KEEP WRITING!!..5/5

Sweetness.
one of your best poems!! love it

Very dark with an unmistakable theme