Very good write. the emotion in such a short poem is awesome 5/5

Well done, what a lovely job you did, emotion is awesome and the way you wrote this was breathtaking.
love always
Tara-Kay
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OH OH OH my favourite formed style!!

I loved this, you truly did a wonderful job with this, triolet's aren't always so easy to write but you pulled this off wonderfully.

This is perfect.