Passing out

by Brie Anna   Aug 14, 2007


The weird thing about passing out is..
your standing upright on the ground
then before you know it you looking up with them all around
your like wtf how'd i get here
but it's alright non can hear your thoughs have no fear
your minds going crazy you realize you lost 8 hours of time
your really scared they all ask are you alright and you say i'm just fine
but what you said was a lie
because really your not ok and you don't know why
the weird thing about passing out is your fine on the ground
but before you know it your loking up instead of down

© brie anna cherry jello press ©

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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