I absolutely loved that poem.
I'll be honest there were some parts i was confused.. like when you say
"cruelty, it seems is your speciality
wondering if your made of human parts
for it appears that you get of on hurt
come to the conclusion you have to heart"
^^That did kind of confuse me..
and also I dont know what the word "succumbing" is??

But besides that it was a wonderful poem, filled with alot of emotion and alot of stuff people can strongly relate to.
keep it up.
xoxo
--Chelsey

There were two spots you need some spelling corrections of suppose to be off and form is suppose to be from. other then that a good piece all and all. I really enjoyed your work this night and will keep an eye on you you have a gift and I don't say that to too many people great work and talk to you later Plot121