I really liked this poem beacuse the ones about secrets and hidden things are my favs. hey, can u return the favor and check out some of mine sometime (there not all that great though)

I am not sure why this poem was writen, but it has really hit the spot for me. it was very good. comment on some of mine. thanks.
<3, casey

Great poem, very clever

Loved the poem, GREAT WORK!!!!

T_T
So "Bitter Sweet"

Great poem wasnt really sure about the meaning but i loved the way it was wrote GREATNESS ^^

Noelle

I'm Not Sure Of The Meaning Myself.. I've Left It For The Reader To Choose The Meaning

"Only This Girl Cried With Tears Of Joy, As She Choked Herself With Pain"

^that line is amazing. i love the intensity and emotion shown in it. this poem is very deep and so well written. your words portray the emotions associated with keeping a destructive secret in so well. i rerally enjoyed reading this. wonderfully written. great work! keep it up! =]
--Viola

I love it!! im luvn all your poems, love how you write them...5/5
xx

Beautiful work!

Sad.
amazing poem.
youre an amazing writer.
5/5.

Holy! Wow, that was so deep yet so awesome It was short and simple yet it seemed so complex, lol this doesnt make sense I know but wow Im just shocked and amazed. You have suck an amazing talent!!! Your on my favorites ^^ xxx Much Love From Roxy

I love your poems, they're on my faves list! They're sooo hearftfelt and really awesome! I agree, you have amazing talent!

Amazing poem, you'rereally talented.

I LOVE this poem.....its sad to know that a girl had such a bad secret that she culdnt stand it anymore

WOW I love this poem it's got so much emotion in it you can really get the feel for it. It's really sad to know what secrets can do to people. You have a real knack for poems keep up the good work
5/5
XxKerryxX

Usually I don't like poems that consist of self harm/suicide etc, but you held my interest all throughout this.

I loved this.

Despite being relatively short you managed to pack in so much depth and emtoion, the flow was flawless throughout the entire piece and the ending you chose held so much depth and power.

beautifully written.

Amazing

Only this girl cried with tears of joy,
As she choked herself with pain

Great lines