Comments : As the Idea Comes to Mind

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww thats really sad, but nothing left within?? it takes great inner strength to be able to feel this pain and cut and write about it - so well done and please write more xxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    Really amazing write.. you are really a descriptive writer i love the line "he feels her heart grow cold, as the anger takes over her body..." well awesome poem keep up the great work** 5/5 easily

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    You are a great poet and i feel your pain..... keep writing... you keep me interested... and i relate.... your poems touch my heart more than my own....