by Letty
When you asked for this poem to be commented on and rated I am sure that you wanted the honest truth. I will start with the first stanza: |
by Debbie
Oh. Well, Miss Letty has seemingly covered each and every point to be taken into consideration. If you go for her advice, I believe you'll [re]create an even better piece. |
by katy
I reli like this peice even tho people say it need re-doing i think its fine as its ur own work and no one can really re-write it for u as it comes from ur heart :) like it xx |
by Gasttlee
I think this is amazing! 5/5 |
by Kaila
Wow very powerful |