Its a good start. keep up the good work.

It's easy to see how sad the situation in the poem is and many people can probably relate. Flow is okay and keep up the good work.
I feel so distant,
there, yet so far away
Fave lines ^^^^^^^
~ Lainey

This is good...i feel like this alot...im not asking to be happy or to be sad..just to be okay...i totally understand this poem...

but one thing i suggest is to maybe make it a little longer...but its good the way it is... good poem.

I love it ~ Short but true ~ And there is just so much power in those words "I want to be OK" ~