by Olorin Aug 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Fallin awake in the mid of day |
by Mycquel
This was a very great piece of work! It made you visualize each phrase!!! Simply beautiful |
Im speechless this poem was amazing |
by ibelievedhim
I'm sure you already know this, but you're an excellent writer. I love the flow and the message was one I could relate to. 5/5 :) |
I am so sure that dreams are born within the mind. The flow is a bit off, but the message is very clear. |