I really liked the style of the poem, how on alot of the lines you used the end word to begin the next line. It made the poem unique overall. If you believe in yourself, then you can acheive. Great poem:)

Take Care.

Another great one!! is it even possible for you to write a bad poem? lol i don't think it is

I got a poem similar but i grew up in a city its called my life check it out and tell me what you think