by shade127
I agree that this is a unique style. Was it hard to write? |
Nice one... but looks lik an amateur poem, is it Luzan and Nazeer? may be u can add more value to ur poem by dressing it up with more lines... and addin it wit a flavour of more patriotism... wat say!!!! i feel this peom is half. for wat eva is written, its 5/5. do enlarge this.... |
by NinjaGirl
A beautiful poem. i enjoyed reading this piece very much 5/5 short and sweet! |
by Hebe
A very unique poem indeed. |
by Fsams
Very sweet and unique poem. Wow I like it and shows some aspects of your country and tradition 5/5 |
by njabulo b
I LIKE THIS POEM, WAY IT EXPRESSED AND UNIQUE, ITS JUST BEAUTIFUL. |
by Maziyah
Haha,short yet it goes with the flow. ;) |
by Fr0g PrincE
A short poem yet a really beautiful expression of simple life.. Good job!!! |
by Roxiee An
Woohoo |
by karissa
I really enjoyed this..it was def something different but it def was something good =] 5/5 |
by sara
The style very unique in this poem great work 5/5 |
Nice poem ^_^ 5/5 |
In your country you'll definitely have enough imagination to write poems of nature..keep it up :) |
Liked the poem , it was unique as everyone said, but it's true , farming is a wonderful job and it gives back to what you put in it great way of life,,, keep it up ,,,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5 |
by Michelle18
This is good...something different than what other people might write about..i like it.. the only thing i didnt like was the way you WrOtE yOuR WoRdS lIkE tHiS...it kinda annoyed me ... but other than that i like the poem. |
Very interesting poem. The writing looks hard to keep up with. hmm. really great poem honestly. '-' (thumbs up) |
by Wallace
Very unique. A pome about farming, I like it. |
by LURVE
It's a really cool poem. so sweet and so much fun! 5/5 |
by Colourful Mind
Writing about nature something i could not do so well done to u x x |
by ANDRE AQUINO
This was lovely...i loved how it Rhymed ...great job...keep the good work ;) |