Comments : PleasurE iN farminG

  • 17 years ago

    by shade127

    I agree that this is a unique style. Was it hard to write?

  • 17 years ago

    by sharath sharathi

    Nice one... but looks lik an amateur poem, is it Luzan and Nazeer? may be u can add more value to ur poem by dressing it up with more lines... and addin it wit a flavour of more patriotism... wat say!!!! i feel this peom is half. for wat eva is written, its 5/5. do enlarge this....

  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A beautiful poem. i enjoyed reading this piece very much 5/5 short and sweet!

    xD
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    A very unique poem indeed.
    I liked reading it, there was a good rhyme.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very sweet and unique poem. Wow I like it and shows some aspects of your country and tradition 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by njabulo b

    I LIKE THIS POEM, WAY IT EXPRESSED AND UNIQUE, ITS JUST BEAUTIFUL.

  • 17 years ago

    by Maziyah

    Haha,short yet it goes with the flow. ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fr0g PrincE

    A short poem yet a really beautiful expression of simple life.. Good job!!!

    frogprince (@_@) ribbbbitt!! ribbbitttt!

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Woohoo
    well done
    Luzan you rocked
    loved your work dear friend
    5/5
    Keep it up
    YOu really mixed many diff sides

  • 17 years ago

    by karissa

    I really enjoyed this..it was def something different but it def was something good =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    The style very unique in this poem great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    Nice poem ^_^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    In your country you'll definitely have enough imagination to write poems of nature..keep it up :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Liked the poem , it was unique as everyone said, but it's true , farming is a wonderful job and it gives back to what you put in it great way of life,,, keep it up ,,,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is good...something different than what other people might write about..i like it.. the only thing i didnt like was the way you WrOtE yOuR WoRdS lIkE tHiS...it kinda annoyed me ... but other than that i like the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by DeMipiE iNCxXDemiXx

    Very interesting poem. The writing looks hard to keep up with. hmm. really great poem honestly. '-' (thumbs up)

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very unique. A pome about farming, I like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by LURVE

    It's a really cool poem. so sweet and so much fun! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    Writing about nature something i could not do so well done to u x x

  • 17 years ago

    by ANDRE AQUINO

    This was lovely...i loved how it Rhymed ...great job...keep the good work ;)