Hey this is a good poem nice read!

but badness and sick people have always existed its just in this world now we have the technology to report it but its always happened!

I totally know what you mean i cant stand it either 5/5

Laura,, this poem is so great... So touched.. Reading this work almost made me cry.. :(
You made me realize how damaged and broken this world is.. It's just.. wonderful piece...
Every stanza has very strong emotion...
The best poem about life i read so far.. Really... :)
Well done.. Keep up the good work.. 5/5

WOW you sum the world all up in just a few words
powerful poem there. wonderfully written and word choice was great, thanks for your comments , excellent write, proud of you, keep it up,,, your friend Tracy d....................................5/5

P.S good to see you back FRIEND

A whole stream of events issues from the decision Raising in one's favor all manner Of unforeseen incidents and meetings And material assistance, Which no one could have dreamt Would have come this way. I agree with Adel; "The life tells a hundred truths to one lie. It has to, to make the lie good for anything." Beautiful expressed penned you portrait here, "As water is to a flower, So is praise to the heart of another."

Anyway, thanks for your nice comment, I very appreciated, take care.

Laura
What a great piece you have penned. The world is becoming such a bad place to be.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

This poem is outstanding. i have no words for how great it is. 10/10!! keep up the great work!!

5/5.You have depicted a very true picture of todays world.People are turning materialistic,moral values have no place.Each one of us have to awaken and take a step to make this world a beautiful place to live in.God bless.

I like writing about life..I relate to this one..in reality people became greed of power they hunger for money this poem suit our world today..great job keep it up!!

An amazing poem
i completely get it.
nd i totally agree.
5/5

I totally agree man. this world has so much it needs to fixed. i really dig your poem a lot and i love your writing style. 5/5. really good job.

Sadly it is a cruel world :( when this should be heaven for everyone, the angers is so right in this poem and so is the feeling of hoplesness :) it gets a 5/5 from me well done :)

Great poem ^_^ reality.......5/5

This is a really good poem, and its 100% true which adds to the affect.
you have a lot of talent.
take care x.o.x

I completely agree with you. this is a great poem. 5/5
<3 sarah

Nice!, it's totally true, what are you saying about world around us! really, great!

This was excellent. it really tells of how things really are. 5/5

Great i loved it 5/5

Wow hunny so pretty and real poem. I loved the wordings and the flow is also cool. The structure is perfect and I simply love love love the starting. 10/10 u know why?? Coz I voted twice ( Its nominated :) )

Tc Misve
Fsams

Wow. you must have taking alot of time to think of this poem, it was so honest and true on how the world is.

it was beautifully written and unbelievably greatly expressed, nice work, keep it up!!!!!!! 5/5