Awh! That poem is so adorable.. It speaks.. Like really seeing because it's so true, you know?

~Kate~

I'm sure you don't need me to tell you--but you are amazing. Your poetry show depth-you are profound! You should try writing sonnets....! This tells you a lot, and gives you valuable advice. You are going to be AMAZING when you get older...

Keep writing--

Toni

Wow this poem was amazing and you did a great job writing it.. not only did it flow really well but it told a great story.. it was sad but it had a very important lesson and you are right...we do need more people like that little boy in the world.. but we also need more people to end that type of violence and more people than will stand up for themselves..

anyway amazing job. I really enjoyed reading it and once i started, i couldnt stop because I was interested to find out what was going on. Great job. Keep it up! =)

Wow
that wuz great
it had a great lesson in it to
it rlly said alot
i got nurves wen it said she hit him though lol
but 5/5
i loved it!!

Wow i liked this one alot it was surley a great lession.. and your friend is right we do need more people like him,this boy is just a child and children tend to be more forgiving then teenagers or adults. They all want to love and be loved by some one. If they are not loved they will do anything to get loved.When their parents are mad and depressed they/we tend to think its our fault for this..when our mother,fathers,sisters,brothers or any one gets mad or leaves we think its our fault. The boy was/is strong and if this was a real story he will grow up a sweet boy to a man and will forever be strong no matter what god throws his way! but great job!

Great poem :)

Aw!!..this had a really good message and the world would provably be better to forgive.
u did great on this.
no ceitizizmQ.hehe idk hot to spell that.....

anyways good job
Aly