Wow! this is brilliantly written. Almost made me cry.

I liked the emotion, and i liked the content.
I didnt think it flowed too well though, but thats my opinion.
You did a great job on the emotion though.
love Tara-Kay
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A write full of emotion and beautifully penned! I like your style and will read more.
Keep it up.

Nice poem. I like how you expressed the emotion in this piece. The flow was a tiny bit off but it's okay. I like the word choice though.
My loneliness exhausts me through and through
to sleep a thousand years
yet still you would haunt me
as in my dreams you do nightly
Strong words ^^
~ Lainey

It was ok..i think the flow was rough in the beginning and i would work on where to put your punctuations cause i didnt agree with some of their placements..the ending started to pick up a bit better...all together the content was good and clear to what you wanted to express and you could feel the emotion put into it..overall its all right..good write and good luck with future writes!

Amie

This is a good poem...some meaning behind it.. i like it..although i dont think it flowed as greatly as it could have..something was just off.... but overall it was pretty good.. i give you a 5/5 still.