WOW! this was an excellent piece, though very sad. 5+

The first stanza is a little "messy" compared to the others but that doesn't take away from the poem. Your great word choice and detailed descriptions made for a very powerful poem. As well as nice vivid imagery. 5/5

marcella

Very heartbreaking story..literally, its a story..and its one thats very well told..very descriptive...wow, just another amazing piece by you, good job!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice poem i like it^_^5/5

Wow nice poem...^_^

Excellent poem. Extremely sad though. If this is true I'm sorry this happened to you.
The flow in this poem was amazing. The rhyming was great as well. This was wonderfully penned and I loved your choice of words once again. I loved how you narrated some of it and used metaphors. Really effective. 5/5

-Shannon <3

I`ll start off by saying that I absolutely LOVE the way that you were able to put the title into there, it was getting iffy but it fit perfectly where it was. This gave me chills, horrible that this happens one too many times, I know many people who have had this happen and reading a poem like this would help them; I`ll suggest it to them. :]

5.5