I love how you prove the point on how everything can look right but none of it be true, very well portrayed..great work!

LOVE IT! Great rhyme! Great Flow! Loved the message...oh how true. This whole piece is really good and I just enjoyed it from beginnning to end!
Charisma*

Jeannie
What a great piece. Very sad but very true. Money can not fix lonliness. It won't ever buy true love. Excellent job on this one.
Love Cindy

Jeannie
The words you weaved into this piece are so very true ... No amount of money in the world can buy happiness or fix the feeling of loneliness.
Excellent read Auntie!
Luanne