Comments : Fires Live in The Air

  • 17 years ago

    by kimberly

    Beautiful! :) love this poem! Different but from the heart!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was amazing. I love the way that it was written and I also love how you made if full of metaphores. Amazing title it fit with the subject of love and as well if fit with the entirity of your poem, which is sometimes a hard thing to do. The last verse was my favorite because it shows that even when your fighting when your in love you can get past it and be happy again. nice work