5/5 very nicely done. I imagained it as i read it and it gave me a slight chill. "the sweet release of humanity.." that was amazing! 5 kudos

This is a great poem. I remember reading it in my contest. you have wonderful writing skills

Your poem makes me want to read the book great job
5/5

Wow, I don't usually like fantasy kind of stuff, but I loved this poem. You have a very nice choice of words, the vocab, the flow, the emotions.. all of it. It was a truly great piece. Keep up the good work.

Aah. The poem that won, lol. First off, thought I would just tell you that when I read this as I was judging the contest, I literally lost my breath..I was amazed at your talent. I LOVE erading fantasy poems, but lately I had given up on trying to find some good ones that REALLY stick with me from this site; but after I read this, I was just awestricken. I loveloveLOVE it. Enough said. Lol...now,

"Invoke the air's seductive melody --
Listen to the beautiful, rising notes.
A lullaby soothes her patchwork heart,
The change begins to its sacred song."

^^ Wow, a great opener...gives the reader a look into what is expected, the imagery is AMAZING and the wording just really brings it together. You have a great talent for this, and for your first fantasy poem...I`m just in disbelief at this. At first, I thought maybe those were lines from the book that inspired you to write this? Maybe it is, I don`t know..but as I read on, your imagery was just as strong.

"The exchange of human vulnerability"

^^ I LOVED that line, there was something in it that really made it stand out to me.

"Soft crunch of spine brings nonchalance,
Change to hollow bone brings tranquility. "

^^ Again, the imagery...it`s enough to make someone`s heart skip a beat in amazement..sure did to mine ! Haha.

Anyways, enough of my blabbing...I love this poem, as you can probably see..and I wish I could give it what it is worth, but no amount of compliments I throw out or numbers I rate it into are able to sum it up. Sadly, I`m only allowed to give you a 5.5 lol.

5.5
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Wow this poem is beautifully written, he wording and setup is great
xx

This is beautiful...imagery blew me away, and thw word usage was beautifully descriptive.
Flow was perfect throughout the entire piece..beautiful.

I have never read nor heard of the book, but I like the write, by the end it was very dreamy. Your grammar was good and your lines flowed well, so all in all, nice job :) Thanks so much for entering the contest!

I love it
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Everythign fits togethery amazingly..
i say keep writing

there is nothing that i can saw that is bad...

You have mastered the art of free verse

Oh wow I'm really impressed. This is a very beautiful piece m'dear. You really deserve a 5/5 in this poem, well done. I think every line is perfect. The word choice is amazing.

Keep up the good work.

Wow! This is impressive. A truly brilliant work. The musical rhythm it held was just perfect. I am really at a loss of what to say! That never happens to me. Haha. Nicely penned. Keep it up!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Loved your choice of wording, great write. The flow was good as well as the structure, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

I think this would be better understood if you've read the book, but it is still a unique, wonderfully penned poem, portraying a good storyline. I like the form of this, and the vocab again is just so natural. Well done. 5/5 Yet again.

Tammie