by Liz
Thats so sweet!! |
by Kayla
Wow.. Even though it is short, I really loved this poem and enjoyed reading every single line. I mean, I can just connect to it in so many ways.. It was a wonderful piece of work. This guy loves his friend so much, but won't tell her so he doesn't ruin their friendship, even though not having her is making him miserable. I also liked how you rhymed it all up and you kept it pretty organized. Great job, keep up the good work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 |
This poem is great..i love it!..keep smiling=] |
by Sarah
Lovely poem James. |