Comments : THE DRUNKEN BUM

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    Another amazing piece I like it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by peter

    Thanks girl

    For giving your thoughts, i was begining to think that i have got it badly wrong, Althought it's quite deep, i twisted the end and thought that the point was put over quite well?......
    This has been submitted for a competition, Nothing special, you had to choose a sentence and build it in-never entered anything before, Don't suppose that it will get anywhere; "But" its a bit of fun,

    Best Regards

    Peter