This poem was full of emotion! i really liked it!
it paints a picture in you head!
5/5

Wow, brianna, i love this one....
i got goose bumps reading this one
awesome
i'll ttyl
tim

Wow Brianna what you said was right
this is your best poem by far!
its so amazing I just love it
you can tell me who the guy is later ;) lol

Hey,
an awesome poem bri, I just love it...
the rhyming and flow are perfect, don't chance anything! I dont have a favorite stanza because I like them all. the ending was great. 5/5
kisses stephanie

That was great