Andrew
good job on your lyrics :) You should have someone take a look at them.
Would love to hear this put to music.
Take Care Cindy

This one were great! i can see that there are lots of emotions in here and you see i found out there's a bit ingredient of sarcasm thing in here but still love it, doesn't affect the song.. great job! do i have to talk about the imagination and flows? well nothing's wrong it was awesome!

Great poem , well written and sad, feel lots of inner emotions in this write, knowing it came from the heart makes it all that much better, great job, wonderful piece here, keep it up,,,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5