Wow..i love this....ive had the same thing goin on for almost a week now lmao...very brilliantly described...i almost hate how crazy talented you are..makes me sick haha -- great job tracy!!!!

One of beautiful penned you portrait here,. even though simply, but enough to touch the reader's heart. for me, this one so perfect written, flow well within beautiful emotions....Awesome!

Some wounds never heal. The pain you describes seems so.. old but yet so bloody fresh that it touches me really closely. Great work, Tracy.

That was so incredibly beautiful! I'm so glad you commented on my poem so that I could find you, I mean that poem was the exact style I LOVE! Amazing job, Mr. Rollings. Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading. :)
~Midnight Sun

Btw- I voted for you to win the next contest of the week. And I only get 3 of those to give out. You really did a great job. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun

Tracy
You have done a wonderful job on this piece. Great imagery.
Take Care Cindy

This poem is wonderfully written. Atmosphere that you created with just a few words is a incredible. This piece is very emotional and you put this one in a right category. Very unique poem with a great topic. Short but very powerful, it deserves 5/5

NICE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!

"dying last words of a poet himself."

Love it, That last line made an impact on me. I wish when im sitting twindeling my thumbs i could come up with something like this. I loved it, i think its such a great little poem and sums up the reasons why people write, it can be an escape. Such a great poem.

Kelly
xx