A well writtien poem Veamm. I enjoyed the intensity you conveyed, like a patriot. There will always be those corrupt ones in our lives.They are even corrupt among themselves. Dastardley, those sons of......
Peace and Blessings

U remind me of our current situation, the reality and a person.. i really enjoy this one, unique in a sense that i haven't read such poem before and u amaze me 'coz this poem only shows that your senses are really working and really aware of the truth. great coz this one says a lot..emotions and no other but the truth! keep up the good work!

Now this is the type of stuff people should write about(including myself) i think these issues are very important but people dont take it to the heart ..

you did a great job..although sometimes the rhyming was off.

other than that this was great.5/5

Hahaha!! i don't know why i'm laughing..=D

this poem is awesome!
is this only for he-presidents? or also for our ever beloved she-president?=P anyway, i like this a lot!! and you're so right.. i don't ever wana hear that mess, The state of nation address..^__^

i bow down to your talents!!^__^
*bowing down* 5/5!!

Sona ba kamo...heheheh concern citezen ka ha....^_^ 5/5 pinoy rocks

I really like this one, not too many venture down the politcal road, you did a good job, nice work.

Really good write, I liked this one...It was another one of those unique ones. Great job...

5/5