by Bre Monique Aug 16, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
She stares out her window and sees a bright, shiny star |
by xxkweenbee
Your Poems Are Amazing. I Really Liked This One, Well Written. |
by David
Another great poem, as with the rest of youre poems i like the emotion you bring out. |
by Sparks
I think it was good and its message was clear. |
by Adelle
I very well written poem with a clar message the flow was good up untill the snd to last stanza where it wen't a little off however everything else about this poem was very good 5/5 |
by Vanessa
I likied this poem , the word choice was awesome, the flow was only a little off at the end, the emotion was strong, the meassage was clear. try reading your poems back to yourself after you haven't read it in a day or so, and you will be able to see where it is off at. 5/5 |