I Can Do Better (Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   Aug 16, 2007


Demanding for you to hand back my heart
For I know I can do so much better
Broke your promise, ripped me right apart
Demanding for you to hand back my heart
Seems Cupid fired yet another poisoned dart
Getting rid of everything, photos and letters
Demanding for you to hand back my heart
For I know I can do so much better

Triolet-Consists of 8lines.
The 1st, 4th and 7th repeat.
The 2nd and 8th repeat as well.
Rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    I love this poem haha, it really doesnt make sense how the person who broke your heart still manages to have a huge piece of it--when they're really undeserving..great job capturing that

  • 17 years ago

    by TracyM

    Aww Jenni, I like this one. And its so true in your words, you *can* do better. love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    What a nice poem ^_^

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