Comments : I Can Do Better (Triolet)

  • 17 years ago

    by the come back

    What a nice poem ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by TracyM

    Aww Jenni, I like this one. And its so true in your words, you *can* do better. love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    I love this poem haha, it really doesnt make sense how the person who broke your heart still manages to have a huge piece of it--when they're really undeserving..great job capturing that