Wow! that is really sad...but i think you need to edit your poems before submitting but still it's superb

Hey!! I love it!! I love sad, dark, and depressing poems, keep up the good work!! 5/5 (",)

Omg SARAH EMILY my babe i loooove it and u it made me cry and the end was like brilent mate luv ya dude XXXXXXxxxxxxxXXXXXX