Wow...it was a nice,I loved your perspective to the girls and your word usage was so suitable and great..But just capitalize i's and it will be perfect

My fave lines are;

Before you do get angry
Just listen and hear me out
For I'm about to tell you
A secret form our hearts

Good job,
Laura

Aww your soo sweet!! "HUGS"

Awe. itz beautiful
5/5 :]]

Lol...This poem is so cute...I loved each and every stanza of this poem...And...The rhyming seem to go fine...
Take care

Thats very kind of you, you are truly a beloved,....awesome work:)