Chicago Cubs

by Jason   Aug 16, 2007


The Cubs are Chicago's Lovable Losers.
They're a team that hasn't won a World Series in nearly 100 years.
But in order for them to become winners,
It would help if the Cub fans get rid of their fears.

"The Cubs are gonna win today," says Sophie.
Since they can't lose all of the time.
But when we reach the year when she sees the Cubs hold up a World Series Champs Trophy,
A Cub player can finally say "That World Series ring is mine!"

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  • 17 years ago

    by sara

    Nice poem and very creative keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This was a very creative poem Jason. Although I must admit that the flow was a little off. I suggest taking out a few words or either reward it so that it flows much easier. It also seems like you couldn't decide if you wanted this to be a free verse poem or a rhyming one. Don't get me wrong I enjoyed reading it and I liked the whole concept of it. I think that you did an excellent job since you haven't written in a while. I say keep working at it and you'll be one of the greatest in no time. I give you a 5/5 for all your hard working.

    Hugs and Kisses
    Letty

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