Comments : The pain in my eyes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    I cant believe no has commented this, "when you see me I'm happy, but really screaming on the inside." great line, I think alot of people, myself included, can relate to this. Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem :) I can see that you really improve keep up the good work. The flow was smooth, well done.