by Sumit Ojha Aug 16, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
When I look at your eyes, I feel disgrace myself, |
These triplets hit the spot |
by Broken Masquerade
I love this, I've never read anything quite like it. It's so captivating and unique. And you express yourself very well. I love the ending it was really powerful. So well written. Well done :) 5/5 |
by Broken Masquerade
I love this, I've never read anything quite like it. It's so captivating and unique. And you express yourself very well. I love the ending it was really powerful. So well written. Well done :) 5/5 |
The colloquialisms enhance the poem for my taste |
by KJ
Now this poem is much better! Great ending, but along the way there were a few grammar problems. But the voice was evident and for that I rate this 5/5 |