Well, my last comment was a little cryptic, so i guess ill make this one straightfoward:

Nemerah, i have read lots of poetry, many beautiful words strung together into stanza, sentence, rhyme... but thats all they are, poems. yours are heartfelt, they show emotion and longing! they cry out for someone to listen, they want someone to hear their pleas. i have only read one other poet who uses such emotion as this.

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Chaosti