Treaded Ground (senryu)

by Melissa   Aug 16, 2007


Someone else's toes
muddled themselves whilst stepping
upon my footprints

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Compact with impact! Good to see you tackle a traditional form. I like how you say things so deeply yet in a down to earth manner. Powerful piece and meaning.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Short...powerful...message.
    Very well written!!

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