by Gary Jurechka Aug 16, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
In fading bloody embers |
by Nix
Fantastic poem, short but so impressing. I like everything about it, well done! I really love the way you wrote it, so deep and you said many things with just a few words. |
by Gasttlee
Your use of imagery was well placed in this one! 5/5 |
by Wake
Truly felt it from this one.. |
by Mo
Short and powerful. I like the words you chose to use and the imagry it gives. Cant wait for you to write more Gary! :) |
"In fading bloody embers" ... the word choice is perfection! Excellent write. |