Give it a tri(drugs)

by Liz   Aug 16, 2007


Give it a tri they say
it'll take all your problems away

tri the pot and crack
tri the heroine and x
tri the uppers and downers
tri the narcotics and shots
tri the wine and beer

go ahead
get stoned and high
get drunk and lie
forget before
forget the pain

tri the drugs and alcohol
why not give it a tri?
if it could help the pain
and erase memories from your brain
why not give it a tri
see if it works

the worst is you could die
you could get so high
u could forget all the good memories
along with the bad

u could just tri it once
and love it
or hate it
but still want it
then feel u need it
and u can't live w/o it
yeah, tri it and enjoy it!

it'll take control of you
you'll need it all the time
but it helps u forget right?
so it's all good isn't it?

you also forget what u did that night
when u were drunk or high
u forget everything but that u need it
u keep telling your self it's worth it
because it is isn't it?
to forget everything
and wake up later to a terrible headache
stomach ache and such

now u can't believe what you've done
u tried it and it's not worth it
u tried it all and now you realize
the freedom is short but not sweet
and the problems u forget for a while
come back and grow even worse
but the drugs and alcohol make it better 4 now
or so u say

now u r hooked and u wanna stop
but u can't
not after this long
then one day u overdose
and U r gone
because u couldn't make them gone

~i don't like this ending any suggestions???~

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  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Great job i love the detail in your poems im putting u on my favs.It helps you become more imersed in the poem i think.5/5

    Cory

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great job...i no a few ppl that got hooked like that..great write......~Cindy~

  • 17 years ago

    by RiCarDo

    Hey this is so true vey nice job : )

  • 17 years ago

    by jarrod

    Now u r hooked and u wanna stop
    but u can't
    not after this long
    someday from an overdose
    your soul will be removed
    your empty heart will cease
    and no-one will notice!

    i suppose if you like my ending you can use it but it'd be better if you took ideas from it and made it your own. good concept and keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Free Spirit

    Oppsy i made a mistake. if u take out the line on the top saying: 'u fight to live but u cant...'

    if u take that out and leave that rest is what i meant to do. i wrote it twice on top and bottom but i meant to leave it only at the bottom. anyways its only a suggestion!