Powerful dark poem. Nice imagery & flow, and the rhyming too. Can so easily relate to but i obviously don't go through with it. =)
I grab a small mirror,
And throw it at the wall.
I use the glass to carve in my arm,
"Life screws us all."
So easy to feel that way ^^^^^^
5/5
~ Lainey

Oh wow...that was a really deep poem...you wrote if very nicely i must say i could feel your pain great job on the poem 5/5 <33

Your a good writer. 5/5 love your poems

The rhymes didn't flow that well, but the rhymes were good. I really liked this poem. This is my genre, I love dark poems.

Damn it, the blade is getting deep,
I close my eyes to fight the pain.
I think of how much he hurt me,
I'll slice and slice until I drive myself insane.
^^I LOVED that stanza.

I think you did an amazing job! :]]

Keep writing!
Cayce

Very well writen , I enjoyed this poem. 5/5

A good portrayed of a desprate display of angquish the flow was good the message abit self serving but the whole thing was a good read.

Soooo much emotion in this poem, i love it. but its really sad. i even shed a tear. keep it up!
10/10!

Very powerfull one much pai n excelent

Now this is much more unique... i like this alot the last stanza is by far my favorite, though it's hard to pick just one part to like the best... great job... 5/5

You did an excellent job here expressing your feelings and how a break-up would cause someone to cut and feel depressed and such. Hmm, it was a bit too simple for me, so many people have wrote about such a thing on the site. I would have almost like to see you make it more of your own.. but.. the thing that kept this poem alive was feelings and emotions. Nice job. 5/5.

Wow. This piece is.. excellent. Probably one of the best I've read. I absolutely loved everything about it; the emotion, the feeling, the word choice, and the rhymes. Beautiful.

5/5

-Briana