This was absolutely amazing - I cant believe Im the first one to comment on it!! VERY much liked that. And I LOVED the title - cause it kind of describes me to a tea.

I love the questions you propose to the reader. Thanks for the read.

Mo
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I fell in love with this one's title. It really drew me in and caught my attention.
I like the flow, the vocabulary, the form, everything. I've read more of your work, and loved all of it.. but found this one to be brilliant. Your lines are a little short, but then again.. it'd sound forced if they werent. You did an excellent job. I enjoyed reading this.

5/5