Comments : Spring Will Come Again

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "The angry grip of winter's chill
    Inside the soul will thaw in time
    N'er faith or dreams to harness hope
    of shattered kisses left behind."

    wow..i love this poem, its just...tells a very vivid story and its full of imagery...amazing work, i love the "N'er"...its almost like, professional slang haha, its really effective--amazing work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    Another beautiful piece you have penned. Word choice and imagery are amazing.

    Among the muddy thoughts will come
    A single ray of light to shine
    Inside the heart and soul that's numb
    An inkling of thyself you'll find.

    I love this stanza. I can relate to these words. Excellent job!
    Love Cindy