by Idiosyncratic Aug 17, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I tell myself |
by Hurtingsoul
The last two lines were incredible left a nice print on my head. outstanding poem don`t ever change it. who knows what your addictions are but you fight hard enough just to the point of exahustion you might just win ....trust me |
This poem started so strong and only got stronger with each stanza. Once again the word choice and imagery were amazing and the last stanza ends it perfectly. Fantastic job 5/5 GG23 |
by Nuh
Wow i can relate to this,, |