by Alissa Aug 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
An Oceanic beauty sits with awe, |
by Nicole
5/5 so beautiful. this is a lovely heart warming poem. your words are so powerful that you can see what you write. well done |
WOW!!!! again another beautiful piece you are a great writer! the ending of the poem i loved so much! |
by oddi tea
Great, Perfect, Angelic...there arent enough words to describe this poem |
I like the story behind this poem, and the imagery in the piece is greatly created. |
by Riz
^^ yeah it does kinda remind me of the Little Mermaid. This poem was actually outstanding, best love poem to me so far. I was hooked and couldn't stop reading. this is lovely, Alissa. You did a great job in this. |