by Cella Bella Aug 17, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Can we wait for brighter days |
by Blissful
This one was just amazing. The message was powerful and hope was evident all throughout it. I have never read anything in this style before but it was one I truly did enjoy. Well done *5/5* |
by Melpomene
Wow, Ok I truely loved this piece it was quite amazing. I remember reading alot of your older pieces when your name was different. I can tell you, you have improved alot and I love this. The style again a good choice for this poem and the meaning portrayed was really interesting. the flow spot on it didn't faulter at all. Well done on this beautiful piece.~Mel |
by Stephanie
Wow. This has got to be my favorite by you. It help a meaningful & powerful message && it just makes the reader think. The emotions were strong & the flow was flawless. |
by Marc Ortiz
Wow, you're really good at different types of poetry. The flow was flawless, excellent choice of words. This piece deserve a 5/5! |
This poem is very good.. and it has a strong meaning. you leave the reader questioning. great job on the vocabulary. your flow was great. your rhyming was awesome. all together it was a great poem. my fav part: |