This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer

You say 'it's kinda bad' ??!?!!? it's really not! i love it! i think it's great! hahaha you should get in a bad mood more often... hahaha (sorry.) really flowed well and told a great story. nice work!

Omg its not a bad poem i love it
its really good. I wish i could write stuff like that you must have felt really sad to write a poem like this, But its really good.

Great poem

Im fine, im perfect, im happy; i say
truly deep down i noe nothinqs ok.
and theres nothinq i can do but silently scream
i just pray and i wish to wake up from this dream.
^favorite stanza.
i can relate.

loved it
nice job:]
5/5

Could tell that you were venting by how you expressed yourself. good work! i really liked this