by stefanie Aug 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I had this one dream |
Aww good peom. yeah we all have dreams. try to make the flow better, i loved it though keepp writing!! 5/5 |
by Seth
Yeah.. we've all had that dream. its a bugger when you wake up tho :p nice job. |
by bon
Ooo this poem is okay. I understand the emotion and feeling put into the poem so i applaud. The flow of the poem could've been better but it's okay how it is right now. I hope everything works out for the best. Keep writing. =D |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, it seem like we have similar dream, as i really felt these way lately for a girl, who is no more near to even tell her these kind of words. |