Wow, it seem like we have similar dream, as i really felt these way lately for a girl, who is no more near to even tell her these kind of words.
this reminds me of a poem of myself that says
i wish i could find a land
where we could be together.
far from those faking lovers in your life
then you would know
i love you forever.

keep up the great work as you are really great.

Ooo this poem is okay. I understand the emotion and feeling put into the poem so i applaud. The flow of the poem could've been better but it's okay how it is right now. I hope everything works out for the best. Keep writing. =D

-Bon

Yeah.. we've all had that dream. its a bugger when you wake up tho :p nice job.

Aww good peom. yeah we all have dreams. try to make the flow better, i loved it though keepp writing!! 5/5