This poem is great, the flow of it all and the description is awesome...keep up the good work!=]

Wow! yet again a beautiful piece! i really like your work! (i may have started reading your poems from the bottom of your page... this is why my comments are backwards)... if that makes sense... i'm very tired.

You have a talent for writing, great job

Really nice poem
can really relate to this
:) definitaly going to check out your other poems !
x x

I really enjoyed this poem you captured lust and love beautifully
5/5!