"its painfully thats true" its painful dont you mean..error?
Last few lines, Loved it, so cute, I loved the fact that you said how much that person haunts you and at the end basically how you wanted that person to stay that way, I love how you think,
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Wow, so true as i am going through a similar thing right now, all i see is just one face, who is so faraway from me without even care that i care about her. that is the strange love,lol

great job, you deserve a 5/5

You use the right words to express yourself.
Good job,

5/5 Ingrid

Great jobb!! i loved this! the imagery was great, and so was the flow... keep it up! 5/5 from me, and thank you for the comments!

Aww...that was really cute : )

Another amazing poem 5/5!!!
its so sweet the way you show your emotions here with such innocent and sweet comparisons
it really is very cute!!!!
and i know how it feels to see one guys face all the time when hes so far away and couldnt care less about me, it sucks, but you writing like this makes it seem sweet
weird huh?

It is very visual. I Liked it. It reminds me of certain people that have come an gone in my life.

Hey..u were right wit dis one..i like dis one:]..ill go check out da others.

Yet another amazing poem, very original, awesome

It's so cute!! I like how you take things from the past like the etcher sketcher i had one when i was a kid but now it's gone.. you had him but now he's gone too.. nice resemblence!! 5/5

I know how this feeling is. I once had a day where I actually thought I saw her everywhere or on other people's faces. it's a pain. but good stuff

I like this poem too...i just recently overcame this current problem!! i connect with this one so much...KEEP IT UP!!